Folk-Spelled is an Editor’s Pick

“Richly Drawn Personalities.” I recently received a review for the first book in the Immortal Holmes series from BookLife, and much to my delight, Folk-Spelled was an Editor’s Pick. It’ll appear in an upcoming printing of Publisher’s Weekly, but I thought it’d be nice to share the full review with readers here. If you haven’t picked up Folk-Spelled yet, I hope you will. And if you did … hey! Thanks for your trust!

This gaslit Holmesian steampunk mystery from Forthright (author of the Amaranthine Saga) opens with a scene as cozily inventive as it is tantalizing: in the fog of a reimagined London called Newcomb, in which humans coexist with magical beings called the Folk, a young “badge”—i.e., constable—named Varti encounters a big, lovable hound. As he bends to pet and scruff the happy beast, Varti says, “You look ready to tear my throat out”—it turns out that Forthright’s protagonist suffers under a curse that makes his every utterance a lie, making communication and trust a daily challenge. With a friendship and a mystery established, Folk-Spelled gets down to business. When a series of murders marked by Folk magic shakes the city, Varti’s best friend, Phil Kemp, is assigned the case, while Varti works from the shadows.

… as cozily inventive as it is tantalizing”

Newcomb comes alive with hexagonal streets, spell-cast coins, and communal kitchens called “mothers.” At its heart, the story is driven by Varti and Phil’s friendship, with Phil serving as translator and emotional anchor, while Varti pushes him to see beyond appearances. Alongside them, that mysterious hound, Doggerel, becomes an unlikely but vital ally between “grumpy wuff”s. Fittingly, for a series starter, Varti’s investigation is shaped not only by clues but by a likable cast: Ramage, the flamboyant harpy who runs The Speckled Hen, is his chosen family; Dr. Kang, the pathologist who first diagnosed his curse; and Tybalt, Varti’s friend from the badge academy, offering tough love and unwavering loyalty.

Varti’s investigation is shaped not only by clues but by a likeable cast…”

The case takes a shocking turn when Doggerel’s true nature is revealed—and eventually Sherlock Holmes himself tasks Varti with a surprising investigation. The web of plot threads and character dynamics can feel dense at times, but the richly drawn personalities, slow-burning mystery, and spirited sense of mist-choked fae atmosphere keep the story consistently engaging. A promising series-starter about a truth-seeking liar, a city cloaked in ancient magic, and a detective who distrusts his own mind.

Takeaway: Promising Holmesian series starter, rich with mystery and magic in a transformed London.

Comparable Titles: James Lovegrove’s Cthulhu Casebooks, Natasha Pulley’s The Watchmaker of Filigree Street series.

Production grades
Cover: A
Design and typography: A
Illustrations: N/A
Editing: A
Marketing copy: A

Art Peek: Philtrum Kemp

Varti’s Bestie. Here’s a peek at Philtrum Kemp, who has been Varti Weller’s best friend since they entered Badge Academy together as boys. All these years later, they’re still quartermates.

Phil wears a copper cloak because he’s a member of the Bastion’s irregulars. He has specialization that suit him to cases involving Folk (a.k.a. the fae races).

Navigating Newcomb

Maps & Coins & Terms. I took my time with world-building for my new series, and I know my way around pretty well now … but it’s kind of a lot to navigate. For the first time, I created a glossary for the back of a book. Folk-Spelled includes a run-down of everything from the names of seasons to the value of the local coins.

If you’d like to snag a printable version of “Navigating Newcomb,” it’s available to members (even free members) over on my Patreon. Here you go >>

ART: Enzo

Outsider’s Perspective. The Immortal Holmes series has two POV characters. Varti knows Newcomb inside and out, but Enzo is a foreigner. Many of the city’s longstanding traditions baffle him. (To be fair, he probably baffles the people of Newcomb just as much.)

Enzo is a mage, and he’s accompanied by his familiars. (I’ll give Skrik and Purdle their own posts.)

ART: Varti Weller

Main Man. This is some of the official character art of Varti Weller, one of the main characters in the Immortal Holmes books. This is his work uniform. He’s a member of the local constabulary in the royal city of Newcomb.

The green cloak marks him as a member of the Bastion’s regulars, and he serves as the head of the Files & Evidence division. A humble position for one of the Badge Academy’s most promising graduates, but Varti’s lucky to have any job at all, thanks to being folk-spelled. He’s essentially cursed to only speak in lies.

Ready for Print Editions?

Folk-Spelled (Immortal Holmes, No.1) was a pleasure to typeset. Choosing fonts and fiddling with page layout are the fun part that comes after all the writing & editing are completed. Here’s a peek at a page in the program I use for readying a book for the printer:

I’m currently taking pre-orders for author-signed copies of Folk-Spelled. Interested? Details are on the Signed Books page. I’ll post pictures as soon as I receive boxes from the printer!

Folk-Spelled Print Editions

This Just In! My print proof arrived, and it’s perfect! The print editions have been green-lighted, so they’ll be showing up in virtual shopfronts for everyone, everywhere. Order at your leisure. Or ask for them at your favorite bookstore. They’ll be able to order them in. Same goes for libraries.

I unboxed:

At nearly 500 pages, it’s kind of a chonk. One thing the print edition has that the digital edition lacks is … the illustrated back cover:

::twinkle::

Squee Post

Folk-Spelled (Immortal Holmes, No.1) is in the hands of readers. If you need a place to react, confer, or kick up a fuss, this is the spot. I’ll enjoy your enthusiasm, I might be willing to clarify small points, but I reserve the right to evade questions that will be answered in due course.

[[[WARNING: HERE THERE BE SPOILERS]]]

Release Day

Folk-Spelled (Immortal Holmes, No.1) is releasing today in digital & audio formats. These should be showing up in virtual storefronts soon. Thank you to everyone who’s willing to brave a new storytelling universe with me!

What if Sherlock Holmes never truly defeated the Baskerville Hound?
What if they’re still embroiled, still vying, still wrestling for control?

Varti Weller’s promising career as a badge ended the day he was cursed by an Olde Childe to only speak in lies. While others from his cohort protect the city, Varti’s consigned to the evidence lockers in the Bastion’s several basements. Until a string of grisly murders bring him face-to-face with a monster and a legend and a job offer. Because Sherlock Holmes is in fresh need of a new assistant. And the job can be Varti’s, so long as he outdoes every other badge—and a foreign rival with designs on Holmes—by proving that the centuries-old detective isn’t a murderer.

A steampunk mystery. An alternate history.
Cozy suspense with a paranormal twist.

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If you’ve already begun reading, hold onto your comments and put them on the Squee Post. (I want this thread to remain spoiler free.)

Counting Down

Four Days (and some change) until Folk-Spelled! I’m doing my best to get all the last-minute details in order for next week’s release of the first book in my new series. One thing that’s just been sorted is … scheduling a drop on Patreon. All members (even free members) will be able to see the countdown for an audio drop of the first chapter of Folk-Spelled, narrated by Travis Baldree. If you haven’t become a patron yet, why not give it a whirl? You’ll find lots of sketches & art of the cast. FREE membership is now an option, and that’ll give access to some of the things I post … including this release day drop.

Thanks for trusting my storytelling enough to follow me into Realmish places. ::twinkle::

Narration Begins Monday

Folk-Spelled (Immortal Holmes, No.1) will be narrated by Travis Baldree, and he begins his recording sessions tomorrow. Monday, February 17, 2025. You can listen to him do his thing (which is amazing) by dropping into the Live Narration channel and clicking the audio link. I’ll be hanging out in the listeners-lounge if you want to chat & react in real time. ::twinkle::

Hope to see you there.

Travis Baldree’s Discord channel is called Cryptid Audio > https://discord.gg/duzCS2D