Folk-Spelled is an Editor’s Pick

“Richly Drawn Personalities.” I recently received a review for the first book in the Immortal Holmes series from BookLife, and much to my delight, Folk-Spelled was an Editor’s Pick. It’ll appear in an upcoming printing of Publisher’s Weekly, but I thought it’d be nice to share the full review with readers here. If you haven’t picked up Folk-Spelled yet, I hope you will. And if you did … hey! Thanks for your trust!

This gaslit Holmesian steampunk mystery from Forthright (author of the Amaranthine Saga) opens with a scene as cozily inventive as it is tantalizing: in the fog of a reimagined London called Newcomb, in which humans coexist with magical beings called the Folk, a young “badge”—i.e., constable—named Varti encounters a big, lovable hound. As he bends to pet and scruff the happy beast, Varti says, “You look ready to tear my throat out”—it turns out that Forthright’s protagonist suffers under a curse that makes his every utterance a lie, making communication and trust a daily challenge. With a friendship and a mystery established, Folk-Spelled gets down to business. When a series of murders marked by Folk magic shakes the city, Varti’s best friend, Phil Kemp, is assigned the case, while Varti works from the shadows.

… as cozily inventive as it is tantalizing”

Newcomb comes alive with hexagonal streets, spell-cast coins, and communal kitchens called “mothers.” At its heart, the story is driven by Varti and Phil’s friendship, with Phil serving as translator and emotional anchor, while Varti pushes him to see beyond appearances. Alongside them, that mysterious hound, Doggerel, becomes an unlikely but vital ally between “grumpy wuff”s. Fittingly, for a series starter, Varti’s investigation is shaped not only by clues but by a likable cast: Ramage, the flamboyant harpy who runs The Speckled Hen, is his chosen family; Dr. Kang, the pathologist who first diagnosed his curse; and Tybalt, Varti’s friend from the badge academy, offering tough love and unwavering loyalty.

Varti’s investigation is shaped not only by clues but by a likeable cast…”

The case takes a shocking turn when Doggerel’s true nature is revealed—and eventually Sherlock Holmes himself tasks Varti with a surprising investigation. The web of plot threads and character dynamics can feel dense at times, but the richly drawn personalities, slow-burning mystery, and spirited sense of mist-choked fae atmosphere keep the story consistently engaging. A promising series-starter about a truth-seeking liar, a city cloaked in ancient magic, and a detective who distrusts his own mind.

Takeaway: Promising Holmesian series starter, rich with mystery and magic in a transformed London.

Comparable Titles: James Lovegrove’s Cthulhu Casebooks, Natasha Pulley’s The Watchmaker of Filigree Street series.

Production grades
Cover: A
Design and typography: A
Illustrations: N/A
Editing: A
Marketing copy: A

Price Change

Costs on the Rise. When I shipped the first round of Folk-Spelled book orders, Mr. Right and I were a little taken aback. We hadn’t realized that the USPS had raised the cost of sending media mail. Usually, I can ship a book in the US for about $5. But that price has been hiked to $9. So I need to raise the cost for the author-signed books I mail out. Again. As of June 1, 2025, I’ll begin charging $30 for nearly all my titles (Rhomiko, which was already at $32 will go up to $35). If you want to catch them at the current rate, contact me! Details are available on the Signed Books page >>

May the Forth

Be with You. I’m home, and I’ve mostly taken care of my post-travel necessities. Laundry handled. Fridge restocked. To be honest, my internal clock still seems to think I’m on the east coast, but hey … nothing wrong with getting an early start to a writing day! ::twinkle::

I spy a 4. (I’m always snapping pictures of fours.)

The writing part of my retreat has given me a solid start on the next novel on my writing docket (Hadwin is the second book in CJ’s Journeymen of Stone series.) It went from zero to 30k with about a week’s worth of full attention. Wish I could keep up that pace on the daily, but I have other responsibilities. One of those is responding to emails (many of them book orders, so thanks for that!), and my serial stories will be back this coming week.

::twinkle::

Art Peek: Philtrum Kemp

Varti’s Bestie. Here’s a peek at Philtrum Kemp, who has been Varti Weller’s best friend since they entered Badge Academy together as boys. All these years later, they’re still quartermates.

Phil wears a copper cloak because he’s a member of the Bastion’s irregulars. He has specialization that suit him to cases involving Folk (a.k.a. the fae races).

Navigating Newcomb

Maps & Coins & Terms. I took my time with world-building for my new series, and I know my way around pretty well now … but it’s kind of a lot to navigate. For the first time, I created a glossary for the back of a book. Folk-Spelled includes a run-down of everything from the names of seasons to the value of the local coins.

If you’d like to snag a printable version of “Navigating Newcomb,” it’s available to members (even free members) over on my Patreon. Here you go >>

ART: Enzo

Outsider’s Perspective. The Immortal Holmes series has two POV characters. Varti knows Newcomb inside and out, but Enzo is a foreigner. Many of the city’s longstanding traditions baffle him. (To be fair, he probably baffles the people of Newcomb just as much.)

Enzo is a mage, and he’s accompanied by his familiars. (I’ll give Skrik and Purdle their own posts.)

ART: Varti Weller

Main Man. This is some of the official character art of Varti Weller, one of the main characters in the Immortal Holmes books. This is his work uniform. He’s a member of the local constabulary in the royal city of Newcomb.

The green cloak marks him as a member of the Bastion’s regulars, and he serves as the head of the Files & Evidence division. A humble position for one of the Badge Academy’s most promising graduates, but Varti’s lucky to have any job at all, thanks to being folk-spelled. He’s essentially cursed to only speak in lies.

Ready for Print Editions?

Folk-Spelled (Immortal Holmes, No.1) was a pleasure to typeset. Choosing fonts and fiddling with page layout are the fun part that comes after all the writing & editing are completed. Here’s a peek at a page in the program I use for readying a book for the printer:

I’m currently taking pre-orders for author-signed copies of Folk-Spelled. Interested? Details are on the Signed Books page. I’ll post pictures as soon as I receive boxes from the printer!